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I loved you
I trusted you
And in return
You broke my heart

A ‘Dear Jane’ letter
Was all you left me
Now I’m alone again
With only bittersweet memories

No explanations
Not even an apology
Leaving me only
Three days before my birthday

You just don’t care
Too wrapped up in yourself
Not looking past your problems
Just tossed me aside

Once you told me
That you didn’t feel worthy of my love
Well, looking back on yesterday
You proved that you weren’t

I won’t take you back
No second chances
For what you did to me
You can’t gain back my trust

It’ll take time, I’ve done this before
I know that I will heal and find
Someone more worthy of me
Then you turned out to be
©2006-2009 ~LadyDreamWriter
:iconladydreamwriter:

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Going though a break up and wrote a poem about it.

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:iconathenake:
Really love your poem so sad :(

I'm sorry about your break up :hug:
:iconladydreamwriter:
thank you. *sigh* I figured that it would happen sooner or later but...

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Taken by Raye, she is wonderful!!!
:iconcantdraw123:
*sigh* tis so sad....
im sorry about all of this....

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i wish life was like a drawing so i could erase all the mistakes..............
:iconladydreamwriter:
thanks. I know, so am I. But what can you do, you know?

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Taken by Raye, she is wonderful!!!
:iconturtlequeen2:
*sniffles* I'm sorry that that happened to you at such a bad time...

This piece contains a lot of raw emotion. For the poem, I love it, but for your breakup, I'm sorry for you.

*hug*

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Inu-Yasha, Bushido Senshi Sailor Moon, and Hagane no Renkenjitsushi are among the best anime/manga ever!
:iconladydreamwriter:
Thank you very much, that means a lot to me. It's real friends like you that are going to help me though this. Girlfriends come and go, but real friends last forever! Feel free to comment on my other pieces too. Btw, what am I going to get for my birthday? *smile*

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Taken by Raye, she is wonderful!!!
:iconfallingbelow:
Weird thing is that I just went through almost the same thing...except it was about 11 days before my b-day. Sorry. :hug:

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"I hold only good intensions,
I try only for the sake of love,
And I fear only the worst."


In the Mind of a Worrywart
:iconladydreamwriter:
It's good to know I'm not alone. Thanks for the comment, glad you like the poem.

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Taken by Raye, she is wonderful!!!
:iconfallingbelow:
I suppose, and I'm always here to talk :hug:.

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"I hold only good intensions,
I try only for the sake of love,
And I fear only the worst."


In the Mind of a Worrywart

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